Really flippy, but pretty good. The flip in-flip-out of the manual is a bit much (less flipping would make this part stronger, I think), and the double kickflip after the tre also seems a bit cluttered. Swap the tre for a grab or something, or a spin.
First grind is awesome.
Also, I admire the fact that you went through the trouble of videotaping your line since you couldn't access Live.