This actually isn't too bad - if you omitted the fourth trick in favor of the setup for the fifth trick, and changed the last flip to a spin or grab, it'd be alright. Different camerawork would make this shine.
Yeah as I was uploading it, I realized I flipped a bit to much.
Too Many Flips
you want to stay close, that's the main with with advanced freecam usually. also don't bump into anything with the camera or it'll go flying